Presentation Feedback

Presentation Feedback

On the 23rd of November we were given the task of presenting our storyboards and general film idea's to the rest of the class.Firstly, as a group we began with explaining the story line of our film trailer. The majority of the class seemed happy with our main idea however had a few suggestions as I will talk about below.

The picture above shows notes that our group wrote down from the feedback the class gave back to us after we presented our storyboard.

Down below I have listed the suggestions the class gave: 

• Start looking for background music.

• Change voice over to be more simplistic and natural.

• Add more public transport to the story line.

• Add a few titles saying producers names.

• Add scenes with little sisters of main character having only little food to eat in order to get viewers to sympathise more with him.