On the 23rd of November we were given the task of presenting our storyboards and general film idea's to the rest of the class.Firstly, as a group we began with explaining the story line of our film trailer. The majority of the class seemed happy with our main idea however had a few suggestions as I will talk about below.
The picture above shows notes that our group wrote down from the feedback the class gave back to us after we presented our storyboard.
Down below I have listed the suggestions the class gave:
- Start looking for background music.
- Change voice over to be more simplistic and natural.
- Add more public transport to the story line.
- Add a few titles saying producers names.
- Add scenes with little sisters of main character having only little food to eat in order to get viewers to sympathise more with him.
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